Hey Tom,
I completed my developmental resume. I hope this is what you are looking for. I added an analysis part to explain the facts in more detail.
My name is Emily Wiedeman. I just turned 23. I received my Associate’s of Art degree from
Mt. Hood Community College in December 2011, and I will be graduating from Portland
State University (PSU) with a Bachelor’s of Science degree in Human Resources
Management in December 2014.
Analysis: I attend(ed) school that is relatively close
to home because of financial reasons. I
chose to attend PSU because their business school has a good reputation, and my
sister received her degree in Marketing from PSU. I basically followed in my sister’s footsteps
(going to Mt. Hood Community College then to PSU).
In addition to attending school, I
also work at WinCo in the Bakery department.
I have worked there for about 3.5 years (since Sept. 2010). I also worked at KMART during my last year of
high school and my first year of college (September 2008—September 2010).
Analysis: I have a strong sense of work ethic. I am able to balance working and attending
school full time. In addition it shows
that I have a drive to educate myself. I
have paid for half of my entire college tuition (while attending!)
I also volunteered at Legacy Mt. Hood Hospital for a year (July
2008—July 2009).
Analysis: I took my original passion of learning about
health care and furthered my capacity of knowledge by volunteering my own
time. I was juggling working and
attending my last year of high school during the time I volunteered at the
Hospital.
As I close in on my final two terms
at PSU, I have been perfecting my resume and applying for full-time, and paid
HR internships during the summer.
Analysis: I put a lot of time and effort into developing
the most accurate and positive image of myself (resume). I care about creating a positive business
reputation about myself. In relation to
my volunteer experience, I have a desire to gain more knowledge about a subject
that grasps my interests.
I applied for PSU’s mentor program
in December and have just recently been paired with my mentor. She has looked over my resume and asked me
mock interview questions (as if I was at an interview for one of the
internships I have applied for).










